Make the download pages about macOS and Windows more readable via some minor edits.

On the Windows download page and macOS download page:

Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into a list for readability.
Split a long sentence in two.
Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
Remove italics around “Advanced users”.
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Anthony DeBarros
2024-08-12 14:38:43 +01:00
committed by Dave Page
parent 251be921fb
commit 9a341582ca
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<h1><span class="text-lowercase">mac</span>OS packages <img class="logo" src="/media/img/apple.png" alt="Apple Logo" /></h1> <h1><span class="text-lowercase">mac</span>OS packages <img class="logo" src="/media/img/apple.png" alt="Apple Logo" /></h1>
<p>You can get macOS PostgreSQL packages from several different sources.</p> <p>You can get macOS PostgreSQL packages from several sources.</p>
<h2>Interactive installer by EDB</h2> <h2>Interactive installer by EDB</h2>
@ -20,26 +20,31 @@ certified by EDB for all supported PostgreSQL versions.
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
This installer includes the PostgreSQL server, pgAdmin; a graphical tool for managing and developing This installer includes:
your databases, and StackBuilder; a package manager that can be used to download and install
additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management,
integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools.
</p> </p>
<ul>
<li>The PostgreSQL server</li>
<li>pgAdmin, a graphical tool for managing and developing your databases</li>
<li>StackBuilder, a package manager for downloading and installing
additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management,
integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools.</li>
</ul>
<p> <p>
This installer can run in graphical, command line, or silent install modes. This installer can run in graphical, command line, or silent install modes.
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
The installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with The macOS installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with
PostgreSQL on macOS, however in the unlikely event that you do have any issues with PostgreSQL. In the unlikely event that you have issues with the installer,
the installers, please report them on the <a href="https://github.com/EnterpriseDB/edb-installers/issues"> please report them on the <a href="https://github.com/EnterpriseDB/edb-installers/issues">
installer Github page</a>. Issues with the installed packages should be reported to the installer Github page</a>. Issues with the installed packages should be reported to the
appropriate project directly. appropriate project directly.
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
<em>Advanced users</em> can also download a Advanced users can also download a
<a href="https://www.enterprisedb.com/download-postgresql-binaries">zip archive</a> <a href="https://www.enterprisedb.com/download-postgresql-binaries">zip archive</a>
of the binaries, without the installer. of the binaries, without the installer.
This download is intended for users who wish to include PostgreSQL as part of another application installer. This download is intended for users who wish to include PostgreSQL as part of another application installer.

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<a href="mailto:webmaster@enterprisedb.com">webmaster@enterprisedb.com</a>. <a href="mailto:webmaster@enterprisedb.com">webmaster@enterprisedb.com</a>.
</p> </p>
<p>This installer includes the PostgreSQL server, pgAdmin; a graphical tool for managing and developing <p>
your databases, and StackBuilder; a package manager that can be used to download and install This installer includes:
additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management,
integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools.
</p> </p>
<ul>
<li>The PostgreSQL server</li>
<li>pgAdmin, a graphical tool for managing and developing your databases</li>
<li>StackBuilder, a package manager for downloading and installing
additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management,
integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools.</li>
</ul>
<p> <p>
This installer can run in graphical or silent install modes. This installer can run in graphical or silent install modes.
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
The installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with The Windows installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with
PostgreSQL on Windows, however in the unlikely event that you do have any issues with PostgreSQL. In the unlikely event that you have issues with the installer,
the installers, please report them on the <a href="https://github.com/EnterpriseDB/edb-installers/issues"> please report them on the <a href="https://github.com/EnterpriseDB/edb-installers/issues">
installer Github page</a>. Issues with the installed packages should be reported to the installer Github page</a>. Issues with the installed packages should be reported to the
appropriate project directly. appropriate project directly.
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
<em>Advanced users</em> can also download a Advanced users can also download a
<a href="https://www.enterprisedb.com/download-postgresql-binaries">zip archive</a> <a href="https://www.enterprisedb.com/download-postgresql-binaries">zip archive</a>
of the binaries, without the installer. of the binaries, without the installer.
This download is intended for users who wish to include PostgreSQL as part of another application installer. This download is intended for users who wish to include PostgreSQL as part of another application installer.