From 9a341582ca02e163f628ac49f9d429dfbe28a637 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Anthony DeBarros Date: Mon, 12 Aug 2024 14:38:43 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Make the download pages about macOS and Windows more readable via some minor edits. MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit On the Windows download page and macOS download page: Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into a list for readability. Split a long sentence in two. Trim some wordiness/redundancies. Remove italics around “Advanced users”. --- templates/pages/download/macosx.html | 23 ++++++++++++++--------- templates/pages/download/windows.html | 22 ++++++++++++++-------- 2 files changed, 28 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-) diff --git a/templates/pages/download/macosx.html b/templates/pages/download/macosx.html index cdaf5d44..3a29c5b4 100644 --- a/templates/pages/download/macosx.html +++ b/templates/pages/download/macosx.html @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@

macOS packages

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You can get macOS PostgreSQL packages from several different sources.

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You can get macOS PostgreSQL packages from several sources.

Interactive installer by EDB

@@ -20,26 +20,31 @@ certified by EDB for all supported PostgreSQL versions.

-This installer includes the PostgreSQL server, pgAdmin; a graphical tool for managing and developing -your databases, and StackBuilder; a package manager that can be used to download and install -additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management, -integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools. +This installer includes:

+ +

This installer can run in graphical, command line, or silent install modes.

-The installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with -PostgreSQL on macOS, however in the unlikely event that you do have any issues with -the installers, please report them on the +The macOS installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with +PostgreSQL. In the unlikely event that you have issues with the installer, +please report them on the installer Github page. Issues with the installed packages should be reported to the appropriate project directly.

-Advanced users can also download a +Advanced users can also download a zip archive of the binaries, without the installer. This download is intended for users who wish to include PostgreSQL as part of another application installer. diff --git a/templates/pages/download/windows.html b/templates/pages/download/windows.html index c21f0ab9..5ee199d2 100644 --- a/templates/pages/download/windows.html +++ b/templates/pages/download/windows.html @@ -17,26 +17,32 @@ webmaster@enterprisedb.com.

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This installer includes the PostgreSQL server, pgAdmin; a graphical tool for managing and developing -your databases, and StackBuilder; a package manager that can be used to download and install -additional PostgreSQL tools and drivers. Stackbuilder includes management, -integration, migration, replication, geospatial, connectors and other tools. +

+ This installer includes:

+ +

This installer can run in graphical or silent install modes.

-The installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with -PostgreSQL on Windows, however in the unlikely event that you do have any issues with -the installers, please report them on the +The Windows installer is designed to be a straightforward, fast way to get up and running with +PostgreSQL. In the unlikely event that you have issues with the installer, +please report them on the installer Github page. Issues with the installed packages should be reported to the appropriate project directly.

-Advanced users can also download a +Advanced users can also download a zip archive of the binaries, without the installer. This download is intended for users who wish to include PostgreSQL as part of another application installer.